I actually like this. Thoroughly enjoyed what you did, compositionally. It was a blast to listen to! Compact yet intense—that's my jam! However, I really think the mixing diminishes the sound quality instead of enhancing it. All dynamics are essentially squashed: there's too much compression/expansion!
I think this piece would greatly benefit, and be much more effective, if the volume of each instrument had more room to move and "bounce" in and out, if you will. The intensity/energy from the compression produces, in my opinion, a result that's substantially more artificial than musical.
Other than that, this is beautiful work, Answare! I really dig your style.
Good luck in the NGUAC this year!